French people please translase this!?

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WISE OWL

It is addressed to the winter wind

Caress on the ocean
Carrying the bird so light
That returns from snow covered lands
The passing breeze of winter
Your echo draws away into the distance
(There are) castles in Spain
(So) change course, turn around and spread your wings
Into the grey dawn of the rising sun
Find a path towards the rainbow
and spring will reveal itself

Caress on the ocean
Put down the bird so light
On the stone of the submerged island
The passing breeze of winter
At last your breath draws away
far into the mountains
Change course, turn around, unfurl your wings
Into the grey dawn of the rising sun
Find a path towards the rainbow
The spring will reveal itself
Peace on the ocean

Beautiful song!

sakura ^_^

i'm not very good in english but i'll try:
text in french:
Caresse sur l'océan
Porte l'oiseau si léger
Revenant des terres enneigées
Air éphémère de l'hiver
Au loin ton écho s'éloigne
Châteaux en Espagne
Vire au vent tournoie déploie tes ailes
Dans l'aube grise du levant
Trouve un chemin vers l'arc-en-ciel
Se découvrira le printemps

Caresse sur l'océan
Pose l'oiseau si léger
Sur la pierre d'une île immergée
Air éphémère de l'hiver
Enfin ton souffle s'éloigne
Loin dans les montagnes
Vire au vent tournoie déploie tes ailes
Dans l'aube grise du levant
Trouve un chemin vers l'arc-en-ciel
Se découvrira le printemps
Calme sur l'océan.

translation(like i can) in english when i whrite ?? i don't know like say in english:
Caress on the ocean
carry the bird so light
Ghost of the snowy lands
?air ephemere? of the winter
At far ?ton écho s'éloigne?
Castles in spain
?Vire au vent tournoie déploie tes ailes?
In the grey dawn of the east
Find a road at Rainbow
The spring will discover him

Caress on the ocean
carry the bird so light
On the rock of a immersed island
?air ephemere? of the winter
Finally your breath goes away
Far in mountains
?Vire au vent tournoie déploie tes ailes?
?Dans l'aube grise du levant?
Find a road at Rainbow
The spring will discover him
calm on the ocean

christopher592862

It's a song and if you know anything about translation you should know that is it is almost impossible to translate literally from one language to another without it sounding at one time boring and flat and at another high blown and ridiculous particularly if you use an online translator.Sakura has very kindly provided the French lyrics but for a meaningful translation you aim for 'the law of equivalent effect' which requires a great deal of skill - more than I have without spending a fortnight on it ! French-English translation is ideally done by an English-speaking person by the way.

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