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Bookworm

Do you like my limerick?

My english teacher Ms.Bateman
Raned away with a man
She then came back
With a broken back
Aparently the man whom she ran away, was a psycho man

    



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Priscilla Duck
Hmm, how about:

My English teacher Ms Bateman,
Ran away with a great man,
Then she came back
With a a crack in her back
Cos her date leaves his mates in a state, man.


cupcake
It doesnt really flow...
Read it out loud and see if it sounds right, to me it doesn't.
For the second line try rhyming man bateman with a different word than man. same with the next to lines.


Lizzy
it kinda weird


Phone
No, you have just disgraced the art of our language.


Orla C
Rating
I think open verse, unrhyming poetry is more your thing, somehow ....


MaryT
ahhhhh..... NO


hiZbAYbE <3
its iight





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