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Do you like my limerick? |
My english teacher Ms.Bateman
Raned away with a man
She then came back
With a broken back
Aparently the man whom she ran away, was a psycho man |
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Priscilla Duck
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Hmm, how about:
My English teacher Ms Bateman,
Ran away with a great man,
Then she came back
With a a crack in her back
Cos her date leaves his mates in a state, man. |
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cupcake
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It doesnt really flow...
Read it out loud and see if it sounds right, to me it doesn't.
For the second line try rhyming man bateman with a different word than man. same with the next to lines. |
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Lizzy
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it kinda weird |
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Phone
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No, you have just disgraced the art of our language. |
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Orla C
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I think open verse, unrhyming poetry is more your thing, somehow .... |
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MaryT
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ahhhhh..... NO |
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hiZbAYbE <3
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its iight |
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